- This poem is full of colours not just that of skin, what do you think these colours signify?
- What does the dialogue in this poem reveal about these two characters?
- The poet dramatises a battle, who wins finally and why?
Ans 1: The landlady also discriminates the poet by saying things like “ARE YOU LIGHT OR VERY DARK?”, this is racism, the landlady is just insulting the poet by making fun of his skin colour. The poet uses sentence fragments, “Red booth. Red pillar-box. Red double-tiered / Omnibus squelching tar”, to describe the persona’s frantic attempt to ascertain the situation. The diction “red”,which is connotative of terror and disturbance, is used three times to highlight the extreme mental discomfort of an African man, who referred to city buses, again humorously, as the idiomatic “omnibus”.
Ans 2: He was happy about the privacy that he believed that he would enjoy, for “The landlady swore she lived / Off premises.” At this stage, we get to know that the two were engaged in a telephone conversation, which, however, was to come quickly to an unpleasant end as the man decided to reveal his nationality - “Madam,” I warned. / “I hate a wasted journey – I am African.” A sudden, unexpected hush of silence is strengthened by a caesura in line 6 of the poem to emphasize the impact of the African’s race being revealed to the landlady. The landlady asked “HOW DARK?” The poet uses capital letters here, and a lot more to come, to accentuate the landlady’s effort in seeking clarification for something that would have been irrelevant to their previous topic, yet it mattered a lot to her. “I had not misheard”, the persona reflected. Before he was able to respond, the landlady asked again, “ARE YOU LIGHT OR VERY DARK?” reinforcing the racist overtone in the English society today. The woman’s pushy, unequivocal stance in pursuing the answer dumbfounded the man, who was so confused and so taken aback by the landlady’s sudden change of attitude that he suddenly appeared to have a blank mind. The automation imagery “Button B. Button A” that the poet uses here not only vividly shows the man’s temporary confusion, but also humorously foreshadows the intelligence contest that is to follow.
Ans 3: The victory the persona had over the landlady in this part of the conversation demonstrates the obvious difference in their education and knowledge, also illustrating the fact that beyond the landlady’s lavish exterior, she was simply a shallow judgmental racist.
Yet again, I think you can organise your answer better so as to allow the reader to understand what you are trying to bring across better. But all in all, I think that this is a good answer with supported points.
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Thanks for the comment, really appreciate it. Will take your advice and do so in the future.
ReplyDeleteYou have very good answers written in your blog but what I feel is that you should use the SEE method so as to organise your answers better and give answers which are more clear and in-depth.
ReplyDeleteWell written Wei Jin but after today's class you must have realised that some of your answers are wrong. Please edit/ correct them.
ReplyDeleteHi Wei Jin! Nice blog you have here. I like the descriptive words you have peppered around your post, they show that you have an excellent vocabulary. The way you phrase your answers is slightly messy but I like your answers none the less. In fact, your words actually exaggerate how ridiculous the whole matter of racism is. Kudos to you!
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